Write with nouns and verbs, not with adjectives and adverbs. The adjective hasn’t been built that can pull a weak or inaccurate noun out of a tight place.
- you can form a grammatically correct sentence with just a verb (e.g “Go!”); and
- the next shortest sentence structure is a noun and a verb, e.g. “Fish swim.”.
Our language is built on nouns and verbs: names and actions. Words that describe nouns (adjectives) and verbs (adverbs) can provide readers with more detail. But if you choose the right nouns and verbs – strong, specific and picturesque – you won’t need them as much.
So you could write:
He inserted vigorously a strong wooden post with a point at one end into the pale corpse that is supposed to leave its grave at night to drink the blood of the living by biting their necks with long pointed canine teeth.
He stabbed the vampire with a stake.
Which is more effective?
Source: Strunk, W. & White, E.B. (1979), The Elements of Style.
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